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Gonna do my ponysona Roy Draga just cause I can XD

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[x] They are possessed by a demon
[x] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (he can turn into a vampire)
[x] They are physically strong 
[/] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[/] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[x] This happens to be red (he has red eyes and red on his body)
[x] Their eyes change colour (depending on what form he's in) 
[x] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[/] They are immortal (he's able become reincarnated like the phoenix)
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular (not crazy muscular though)
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc (pyrokinetic, telepathic, etc.)
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc 
[/] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (a cybernetic virus for one of his forms, and sometimes he uses a special medallion to use the powers of his ancestors)
[/] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet (his evil half has the potential power to cause the world's end but that amount of power has never been used and barely even known so it's almost non-existent)
[/] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers (some of them yes, some were natural)
[ ] They are a healer 
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family (he's a prince)
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[xxxxxxxxx] They have lost one/both of their parents (his parents were killed in an invasion)
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death 
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child 
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ]They are emo/cutesy 
[/] They look much younger/older than they really are. (sorta older)
[x] They are currently in a relationship 
[x] They have a mental disorder (he has PTSD, and slight ADHD)
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[/] They struggle to stay sane (sometimes)
[/] They are a psycho (he can go psychotic) 
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (dragons)
[x] They have a guardian spirit (an animal spirit, it's a phoenix)
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul 
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (his horn, markings, and hooves/hands glow when he's angered or stressed)
[/] They have a rare/unusual name (idk how rare the name Roy is and i'm pretty sure Draga ain't a real life last name so maybe XD)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[x] They are connected with a certain element (fire and earth)
[x] They are connected with a certain animal (dragon and phoenix)
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[/] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (he's the last among a dying race called Reincarnates)
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (the whole power to cause the world's end thing I guess)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[/] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown 
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[/] They are very mysterious/dark (he can be)
[x] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly 
[ ] They are very patient 
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here) (assassins and Reincarnates, oh and soldiers XD)
[/] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (sometimes a medallion but not very often)
[ ] They have amnesia
[/] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (does the cybernetic virus count?)
[/] The have a curse upon them
[/] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[x] They are 'the chosen one' (in a bad way unfortunately)
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 34.5

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[/] They are addicted to drugs (they tried some sort of drug once and never made that mistake again, where as i'd never even wanna touch a drug like that XD)
[x] They have a short temper (sometimes he can)
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 1.5

Final score: 33
RESULT: Mary-Sue (FACK XD) It's weird this character barely annoys anyone. Probably because most of this stuff isn't used all that much when I rp with this Oc. In fact most of this stuff about him isn't really noticed all that much so I guess it makes up for how much is here XD
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue

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Divachu's avatar
imma have to use diva cuz I don't really have much of a ponysona other then Lemon Twist

and I haven't worked on her much